thegirlwhofateloves

There is so much more to this poem than just the words. It sparks the imagination. I really like it. Kind of agree with duskglimmer about changing 'sparkly' to 'sparkling'....hmmmm....actually ...

I like the whole poem, but I really love the last stanza.

well my mum's an uuuuuugly creature, I'll tell you that for free - I dunno where I got my amazingly good looks from!!! lol. It's a groovy little poem.

That's a really touching this based on something that's really happened to you? Because it sounds as though it is.

gosh, my toe tastes rather nice

You can lick your own elbow??? Nooooo!!You lie! hehe I'd lick *******'s ....... lol ooooh, get me! Methinks I have a scary online crush... :roll: hehehehehe.....

You make me laugh. Feel free to kill life has no meaning anyway ...but you have to find me first. So there! x x x

Love is just an illusion. It does not exist. LUST does. Now that's painful...but more so for males than females...teehee...I have a mind like a sewer, me.

lol amusing stuff! :elephant: (Sorry...I just really like the way it dances!)

Confusing but compelling...possibly because it's confusing! But kind of groovy at the same time. One question...are you gay?!

Nothing groundbreaking, but that doesn't mean it's not any good! I did like it, but I have to say that I dislike slang in poems, unless it's appropriate. It kind ...

Amen to that.

It's good. Expressive and forceful.

It's fantastic. It's not despicable! But maybe that's because I understand where you're coming from lol. It's hard, yes, but that's because some things have to be. And just because ...

It's about stupid behaviour that I experience because I'm an idiot. It's about my self destruction...if that doesn't sound too pretentious! x x x