thegirlwhofateloves

..Yeah I've looked at the whole thing...personally, I like it how it is, even if no one else does, but I understand why it wouldn't make sense to anyone else. ...

Woohoo yay...good ol' Bobo!

There are very few celebrities who have my sympathy when it comes to this... They are aware of what they're getting themselves into - and they've made the choice (and ...

:-s I feel bad for having to say this...but, honey...no. Really. Just...no.

Lol it's her ACTUAL birthday today...her pretend one is in June - I think it's the 17th or something. God Save The Queen! :wink: Good old Queen Liz...she's the only ...

=D> Fabulous work, darhling. :wink: Why can I never write anything constructive...*sulks*

...The Donna's are punk?...?...are they? (that's a real question...) I like The Clash (how can you not?) and ^them...and they're the only two I've heard of off that list...though I've ...

A few niggly bits..but nothing worth as much as what my finger could place. So I shall settle for good work! (Ignore me - I'm very tired, so i'm not ...

Love it, CL. It's a little odd, completely beautiful, and it ignores some of the 'rules', which is great if done properly...which you have.

...It's ok. But you could probably do better? A stroke of blue and a spot of orange, visualize the sun and the ocean. A mist of black and a dot ...

^ Agreed. Nice poem, definitely - but a leetle tweeking needed.

I really rate your ability to make 'darling' and 'sweetheart' work in a poem! lol...seriously, this is fantastic. My only problem would be that you missed the ' out of ...

...I don't know. :) It's not bad, but...something's wrong. Not sure what, but it just doesn't read quite right. Don't know what it is...maybe sounds a little forced in parts. ...

THIS is beautiful. I seriously think so. It's well worded, brilliantly written, without being regimented or stiff. It hits the right notes on every level. *sigh*...and I remember being fourteen... ...

(To my Great Aunt Gil) Tick Tock I listen to that clock Grandfather in the hall And I See Black cabs Mayfair, Glamour... Oh, what a life could be London ...