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Hey there Ofir :) my name's Eddie and I'm gonna' take a stab at reviewing this for you today. Red - Mistakes ; Green - Corrections ; Pink - Suggestions ...

Hey there :) first of all, awesome SN! Secondly, thank you for my review. Here I am, with one in return! And thirdly, this piece had me within the first ...

Hey there, my name is Eddie and I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you today. :) I'm so pleased I've come across another Twilight FanFiction, I'm ...

Hey there! I'm Eddie and I'm going to take a stab at reviewing this for you today. :) First of all I really liked the idea of writing about a ...

Hey there :) I'm Eddie and I'm gonna take a shot at reviewing this for you today. Also, this is review number two of Review Day! Before I even begin, ...

Hey there :) I'm Eddie, and this is my first review of Review Day, aren't you lucky! Red - Mistakes Green - Corrections Purple - Bits I Liked Pink - ...

First of all, ditto what all the others said. I cannot believe you were 8 or 9 when you wrote this, its certainly impressive. And before I start I have ...

I'm back! The prologue has lassoed me into the ring! Ahem, on with the review! Red - Mistakes Green - Corrections Purple - Bits I Liked Pink - Suggestions Chapter ...

Hello there! Here I am, as requested. Lets begin the review :) Red - Mistakes Green - Corrections Purple - Bits I Liked Pink - Suggestions I cried. Looking back ...

:) Welcome to YWS :) My name is Eddie and I'm going to review this for you today, and quite frankly; I'm going to correct all of your grammar and ...

Hey there, I'm Eddie and I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you. :) Please don't think I'm nitpicky but I do tend to pick out every ...

In a deserted Alley, close to the Seattle boatyard. Lurked twenty bloodthirsty, strong and very very young and inexperienced newborn vampires. An upturned car in flames lay in the middle, ...

I was just talking it through with a few members and I asked if there were ever any 'classes' held here at YWS, to which they replied no. So I'm ...

A/N: Just want to say a big big thank you to every single one of my lovely reviewers; deltadalek ; Pundit ; seeminglymeaningless ; Abocreature ; and Razzker Preface The ...

A/N: This is one in the long line of 'one shot' random pieces of writing I have scattered around my laptop, loosely based on the video game 'Splinter Cell - ...