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Hey there :) I'm just passing through, I've decided to cut down on the size of my reviews, as I tend to waffle on very pointlessly, so this is gonna ...

Hey there :) I wasn't really planning on reviewing much tonight but your piece certainly caught my eye straight away, so I thought it would be rude not too! I've ...

Four The red glare of the alarm almost caused me to have a heart attack the next morning, or should I say afternoon, because as clear as day in the ...

One I’ve never settled anywhere before. I’ve never been anywhere for longer than six or so months. I’ve never been on first name terms with the neighbours, I’ve never been ...

Done :) so sorry I was so late, won't be happening again I promise. Amazing works, both of you. Next? :D

Hey scream :) first of all my deepest apologies for being kind of late reviewing this, I've had a lot on and have sadly been neglecting YWS recently. :( But ...

Hey there Spork! :) I would be most appreciative if you could take a quick look and maybe review these two short extracts I have that are from a Romance/Science ...

Hey there Yuri! :) I would be most appreciative if you could take a quick look and maybe review these two short extracts I have that are from a Romance/Science ...

Hey there blackbird! First of all; I am so, so sorry that this review is so late. I've had a lot on recently and haven't been on much, I'm going ...

Three The Gardeners were a fairly young couple in their late thirties, they said they had always wanted children but Mrs. Gardener had always preferred them to be ‘ready made’. ...

Two It was the first day of my brand new school, in a brand new city where nobody knew my name, yet. And certainly nobody knew about my oddity. If ...

Hey there :) my style of critique I would say is meticulous , I go over every spelling mistake and grammatical error that I see, I like to suggest rather ...

Hey there! I'm Eddie and I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you today. :D I can't go down my normal road of correcting typos and grammar, ...

Hey there :) I'm Eddie and I'm going to take a stab at reviewing this for you today! Red - Mistakes Green - Corrections Purple - Bits I Liked Pink ...

Hey there Sakura :) I'm Eddie and I'm going to take a stab at reviewing this for you today. Red - Mistakes ; Green - Corrections ; Pink - Suggestions ...