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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Gratitude..

    Awesome poem. I think it needs to flow better though. And capitalize though I must say I am not a grammar freak (I just started a sentence with "And"). You ...

    Dec 11, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Tipping The Velvet {one}

    wow. I'm new here so this is the first peice I've seen that you've written. :D I didn't think it was boring at all actually. I do agree, sometimes the ...

    Dec 11, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello peoples!

    hello Jade and haruno :D Anyone up to look at my story? Its called Aubrey's Raven under "Other Fiction".

    Dec 11, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello peoples!

    oh cool. someone else whose into CCM. You don't get that often. My old church was like that too. 90% of the congregation was over 50. i personally love Casting ...

    Dec 10, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?

    I used google as it seems many other people did too. I was searching for places to post your writing online and have other teens "critique" it. I found it.

    Dec 10, 2008
  • Official Polls Re: What is Your Favorite Part of Writing?

    I chose everything for this one. Everything about writing is so much fun that its hard to just contain the answer to just "creating characters" or "developing the plot". Usually, ...

    Dec 10, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello peoples!

    Not that far i must say. About 10 pages, its called Aubrey's Raven though I may change the title because I don't know if I'm going to keep that plot ...

    Dec 10, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Aubrey's Raven - Chapter 1

    Hope you enjoy :D I remember the coldness of the water that hit my face that afternoon. I awoke with a jerk and unfamiliar panting. Everything seemed blurry—a sole outline ...

    Dec 10, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello peoples!

    sorry :wink: Its a bad habit to have no caps. I love Comtemporary Christian music, mostly rock and pop. Not the hard rock though. I like both (reading and writing). ...

    Dec 10, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: How I Killed Mona Bradley (intro)

    I think it is really good! I like how it makes you really want to read more. She had so much potential, and, if there was one thing I knew ...

    Dec 10, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: After Dark Ch.1 Alone

    ok. you need to get rid of all "..." or elipses in plain english. i don't mind stories where in the beginning, you have no idea what is happening but ...

    Dec 10, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello peoples!

    Hi, i'm new to the site. Just wanted to say hi! I love to write obviously :D even though i get a new idea for a story every few months ...

    Dec 10, 2008


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein