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  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: From Vengeance to Valor

    Yeah I agree with Buscador!, the beginning of any novel is the one of the most important things to look out for because thats the first taste the reader gets ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: What are you listening to at the moment?

    in a moment, I will be listening to either Whatever You're Doing by Sanctus Real, Everything by Lifehouse, or Awakening by Switchfoot. haven't decided.

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Park (excerpt from my novel)

    Macs took care of all the nitty gritty but the first thing that came to my mind when I read this was "Don't say she was raped now!" To keep ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Who are your influences?

    hmmm...interesting question. also in no particular order 1) Melody Carlson 2) Caroline B. Cooney 3) Markus Zusak 4) Ellen Hopkins 5) Dean Koontz. I've only read a little bit of ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]

    Banned for banning someone who banned their sister.

    Dec 20, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Love, Death, Coming of Age

    Welcome to YWS! I don't know someone has already told you this but we like to keep a 2:1 ratio here with reviews and posts. aka before you post anything ...

    Dec 20, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Nightly Sonata-Prologue (edited)

    This was pretty good even though it was only a few paragraphs. Though I would have to say that to be a prologue it needs to be longer. Make sure ...

    Dec 19, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: hey, hows it goin?

    Ok, welcome to YWS! Its a lot of fun and you get to have someone else take a look at your writing for you :D Vampires, sorry not a Twilight ...

    Dec 19, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]

    Banned for saying the thing I was just about to type.

    Dec 19, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]

    Banned for being a bleeding rose which is impossible....

    Dec 19, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]

    Livinginfantasy: Banned for posting at the same time as me

    Dec 19, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]

    Banned for banning me over my awesome siggy

    Dec 19, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]

    Banned for getting my country wrong. Its not a fairytale land, its a land where fairytale creatures and humans coexist!!! There's a difference.

    Dec 19, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]

    Banned because you let someone make you feel pathetic.

    Dec 19, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: To my father...

    I agree with dark_angel, this is a very emotional poem. I will always have feelings for others I relate to this stanza, hence I really hope that you do get ...

    Dec 19, 2008


You flare, you flicker, you fade... And in the end, all your tomorrows become yesterdays.
— Megatron (Lost Light, by Roberts, Lawrence, Lafuente)