thefireinmeisJC

Its ok. Sorry, if I burst your bubble but its really cliche as people have already said but you use the same few words over and over again. For example ...

Hello people, this is my first song. Hope you enjoy :D Flowers are pretty things Pretty things were not meant to die Don’t tell me that you didn’t see Because ...

Excuse me for being a lazy bum but I'm a horrible name thinker upper so all the "Earthly" words (ie playroom, light bulb, lunch) will be changed to make it ...

Hi everyone! I decided to make the previous part of Redemption the prologue, so this is Chapter 1. Sorry, if I confused you guys on that :/ Also, considering that ...

Ok, this review won't be of absolute help to you since everyone else beat me to all the nitty gritty stuff and I totally loved it so no worries there..... ...

Wow. I truly love each and every one of you. Thanks, for all the help! I find it fascinating to see where everyone was confused though I thought it was ...

Hi! This isn't quite an experimental story though I've never written fantasy before. From the Prologue/Chapter 1 (haven't decided yet) you can't really tell its fantasy except for one line. ...

Banned for spelling "monkey" wrong.

Oh shoot. I thought this was rate your avatar not your siggy. So my bad, 10/10. Its cute and from Hans Christian Anderson!

Totally freaky. 5/10

Hi everybody! I was wondering how many people on here like CCM (Contemporary Christian Music) like I do! I saw some heads in another thread...only like 3 people though. I ...

Banned for discriminating against people who live in parts of the world where the time is multiple hours ahead of the USA's and any other country who is still in ...

First of all, Welcome to YWS! I'm disappointed in you to say that you are "only" 14. 14 yr olds rock and can do anything! right... ok, back to the ...

Thanks so much everybody for your tips in fantasy writing. It will help a lot. Yeah, everything is still coming together in my mind for magic etc. The world is ...

well actually i think making him fully blind is good. I know I'm in the minority but his fiancee can be beautiful to HIM. I mean not to sound weird ...