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Re: The Vampire and the victim
Welcome to YWS!! It's very good though you fill up on descriptions too much. I didn't really read it all...though I can tell from skimming that it sounds interesting...I would ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: Blue Bird's Blood
This was cute actually. I agree with Pandy, it makes a circle (or cycle). There's a book I know that does some of that... Anyway, I think there are some ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: There are no men on Young Writers Society!
this is a hilarious thread.... melkor: I'm a girl obviously and I hate the romance genre. I never even touch the romance section of YWS (well ok I was over ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]
Banned for having 103 posts but only 11 reviews....
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]
Banned for having a freaky movie in your avvie (you always get banned for your avatar, don't you?)
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: The End
Ha, I just typed up a nice litle review for you but then instead of minimizing, I clicked exit. Deleting all of my hard work. But that's ok. I shall ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Just joined, so thought I should just post something.
HI! Welcome to YWS! Since I see this is your first post, don't forget to post a 'ello on the Welcome forum under Community Forums (its the first one). That ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Evergreen [revised]
THIS IS AWESOME! so awesome that I used all caps... :P I've read some of your other stuff and I had to laugh at the "congrats for not having so ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Self-Destruction
*unglues eyes from screen* This was really really really good though really really really confusing. Who's Mike? Who is Cam talking to in the italics?? Is one part a flashback ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: What is your favorite atribute in a charcater?
I like a number of characteristics in characters (tongue twister...) namely humor, caring, and nerdy. Nerdy can get stereotyped a lot like Lord of the Rings obsessed, computer geek, glasses, ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: The Second Spectrum of Sanity [Sec. 4: The Crimson Venom]
Wow. This was great! I haven't read the other ones though. I saw that it was in second person, correct? And I became interested... I like how I could seriously ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Savior
Hello! This was interesting actually. I agree with the others - some parts were a little boring so I simply skipped two paragraphs or so to get to the who, ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Lutra
I agree with KJ. There's too many "they this" and "they that". Show don't tell. I liked the beginning though. Nice description though just an afterthought: how can your fur ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]
Banned for having as many stars as me.
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]
Banned because your username is a type of sandwich.
Jan 3, 2009