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Welcome to YWS!! It's very good though you fill up on descriptions too much. I didn't really read it all...though I can tell from skimming that it sounds interesting...I would ...

This was cute actually. I agree with Pandy, it makes a circle (or cycle). There's a book I know that does some of that... Anyway, I think there are some ...

this is a hilarious thread.... melkor: I'm a girl obviously and I hate the romance genre. I never even touch the romance section of YWS (well ok I was over ...

Banned for having 103 posts but only 11 reviews....

Banned for having a freaky movie in your avvie (you always get banned for your avatar, don't you?)

Ha, I just typed up a nice litle review for you but then instead of minimizing, I clicked exit. Deleting all of my hard work. But that's ok. I shall ...

HI! Welcome to YWS! Since I see this is your first post, don't forget to post a 'ello on the Welcome forum under Community Forums (its the first one). That ...

THIS IS AWESOME! so awesome that I used all caps... :P I've read some of your other stuff and I had to laugh at the "congrats for not having so ...

*unglues eyes from screen* This was really really really good though really really really confusing. Who's Mike? Who is Cam talking to in the italics?? Is one part a flashback ...

I like a number of characteristics in characters (tongue twister...) namely humor, caring, and nerdy. Nerdy can get stereotyped a lot like Lord of the Rings obsessed, computer geek, glasses, ...

Wow. This was great! I haven't read the other ones though. I saw that it was in second person, correct? And I became interested... I like how I could seriously ...

Hello! This was interesting actually. I agree with the others - some parts were a little boring so I simply skipped two paragraphs or so to get to the who, ...

I agree with KJ. There's too many "they this" and "they that". Show don't tell. I liked the beginning though. Nice description though just an afterthought: how can your fur ...

Banned for having as many stars as me.

Banned because your username is a type of sandwich.