thedelphinater

Oh, nice sort of parallel. I'm not very religious, but I liked this twist on things. I'm kind of slow, and I got it on the fifth day. Anyway, I ...

This was good. Just two little things I noticed: Firstly, the beginning of every line has to be capitalized, even if you're continuing a sentence. Secondly, the flow and all ...

Oh my God... I don't even know what to say. This is so sad. To some level I feel your pain, because my parents got a divorce when I was ...

Aw, this was sad, yet strangely optimistic and sweet. Anyway, so far as plot and all that jazz goes, good job. Your spelling/punctuation/grammar was pretty good, except for a few ...

I apologize in advance, because this is a topic of much debate between my friends (which is the same group Pen mentioned, and yes, I'm one of the Atheists, and ...

'ello! I like it so far, though I do have a few little nitpicks/comments. My first nitpick is the names. To quote George Carlin, "What happened to Bob? Where did ...

Howdy! Your constant grammatically and spelling-ly correct poems are starting to irritate me Eliza. Can't you mess up on something just once? :P Anyway, though I sort of know what ...

Define last thought. Do you mean last thing you thought about concept wise, or like, your exact thoughts? Whatever, I'll wing it. Ouch! Oh f***! That's not right and/or possible! ...

Name: Emily Age: 13 Fav book && YES ONE: AHH!!! (no, that's not the title, that's just me under stress). Umm, probably... Good Omens. Fav author: Terry Pratchett Fav food: ...

Fortunately, you're wrong. Or at least I think/hope since basically everyone I know is an adult or in Middle School... TPBM hasn't the slightest as to who Neil Cicierega is ...

This was good. I liked the softness to it, it gave it a kinda mellow feeling, which I think is what you were aiming for. I like the tree, though ...

Jusyt another goofy little song I decided to write. In a sudden burst of inspiration/bordem, this song was created, though punctuation was not included, so that may need help. ------------------------

I like chocolate and coffee and words. (Though my New Yawka accent helped me with that one. :)) Uh kuy, waehuh oo ay.

This was good. I liked how it was this character that was dangerous and an animal, but knew that and tried to reason with/justify the less...God, I just lost the ...

Bleh! I'm too lazy to fix my mistakes. Besides, it's meant to be immature, stupid, sappy, goofy, cheery, whatever-y. Like, our writing styles are different I guess. I mean, to ...