thedelphinater

Hola mi amigo! It's review time! This poem was awesome. The flow and rhyme scheme and all that were good. Except for a few little nit-picks, I couldn't find anything ...

Howdy! These were pretty good. My favorite one was 8, 'cause the tree and all that looked cool and stuff... yeah... word vomit... Anyway, I do agree with what Mira ...

Hi! This was amazing! Like, I'm not just saying that. This was really good. Just one little nit-pick though: I watch over the fighting army They all work in harmony ...

Hi there! Ok, I couldn't find anything wrong with the flow, the spelling, the French-y-ness, and so forth. Here's my suggestion for punctuation and such: It’s so hard to believe ...

This short story is based on the song "Carolina Drama" by The Raconteurs. (I would recommend listening to it before you read this.) I was listening to it one day, ...

Nit-picks first: I just [b]couldn't seem Random [b]. to make the wotds come out right Words, not words. Your punctuation needs work. You have it, but you need more. All ...

I agree, this needs work. Add capitalization, fix some of the punctuation, find a flow, and get the tenses/ending right, and then I'll critique. Even though you can post things ...

I liked this, it was good. The ending was a bit dark, but I don't care about that sort of stuff. A few little things though. First of all, where's ...

I didn't really get this either. You used pretty words and such, but it didn't really make any sense. Like throwing together a bunch of foreign words to try and ...

This was good. I liked the last stanza the best, and I can certainly relate. A few little things though. it is the only thing that reminds it of what ...

Aww! They're adorable! I love kitties! Now I feel all fuzzy inside! I'm not gonna critique this or anything, since you said it was just for fun. Also, I'm too ...

This was good. So far as your description of the image goes, you did an amazing job. You also did a wonderful job of creating a sort of story behind ...

This was good. So far as all the prefaces I've read, this was certainly one of the better ones. It gives the reader an idea of what the story is ...

This was good. I liked the way you portrayed time, and I liked the whole concept. I liked how you portrayed time as something almost human, but not quite. Like ...

I'll just get my one little nit-pick out of the way first: performing an assortment of chores around his parent’s residence. I think it should be parents', because there's more ...