thedelphinater

This is probably one of the funniest Twilight based scripts I've read. I used to like Twilight, but you're so right about how tiring it's getting listening to people praise ...

OK, punctuation Nazis, I'm not very good at grammar, but I added the commas. So thanks to Forever Threnody for helping me with that. And I will admit, that this ...

Just the slightest chance, A flicker of hope, When you say hello, And I say hi, And you say how are you? And I say I’m fine, I’m such a ...

Hey best friend. Now I can nitpick your work even further. Mwuhahaha! Ahem, anyway, I'm not sure if my advice and criticism is even relevant in the wonderful world of ...

Hola mi amigo. Under the "Okay, so I'm..." category, you should change "obsessive" to obsessive compulsive and add strange or something to that effect. Also, Bon Jovi doesn't deserve to ...

I thought this was really good. I liked that it wasn't just a song, and actually had a moral and something to say. A few lines seemed a little awkward ...

I thought this was pretty good. It moved a little too fast for my taste, but that's understandable if it's a short story for a school project. I would definitely ...

Wow. This is so completely random and ridiculous (and freaky) it shouldn't make any sense at all, but somehow, it does. I guess it makes sense ia=n a comedic way. ...

This was really funny! I used to be a huge Twilight fan, and all that jazz, but now I find myself hating it. It's not that the books aren't good, ...