thedelphinater

Um, wow. Depressing much? Anyway, pretty good, just it seems to be a little erratic. Like, you were almost trying to create a rhyme scheme or some sort of rhythm, ...

I liked this. A little darker and more depressing than what I usually read, but still good. *Gasp!* Grammar and spelling alert! A couple of misspelled words and things that ...

I'm horrible at punctuation, so I just wanted to apoligize to all you grammar nazis who are porbably going to scream when you read this. ----------------------------------- The cold hits you, ...

Not a clue! TPBM is obsessed with Chuck Norris.

Generally I'm none to partial to poetry, or strict rhyme schemes for that matter, but I really liked this. I think that the rhyming actually makes it better than, I ...

This was good. I like the political satire in it. Most presidents are bad presidents. A few things quick, little nit-picky stuff. ...before too-many died. I don't think there's a ...

I thought this was good. I liked the concept and the plot so far. One thing I noticed though was that, especially in the first section, you said the names ...

This. Was. AMAZING!!! I was in hysterics the entire thing. I hated New Moon with a passion, and this just made my day. I couldn't find anything wrong with anything. ...

YAY! C'est moi! The Delphinater! First name The, last name Delphinater. And middle name Pablo! And I am aware that Pablo is a guy's name, but too bad! I am ...

I give that signature a 42 out of 10! Anything with Chuck Norris in it is awsome!

I thought this was good, though I did see a lot of similarities to His Dark Materials. They both have the idea of a parent-less kid living at a university ...

I thought this was good. I liked the little environmental message in there. Just a few little things. Your rhyme scheme makes sense after the first... 4 stanzas, but its ...

Wow. This was really good. I honestly don't see why you thought it was so weak. Just one little nit-picky thing: Ladies and gentleman , it is now twelve o' ...

Yo. Few things. First, though I thought this was very good, I must agree with Wes that it is kinda emo, or at least depressing. His shriveled body was too ...

Two things: Firstly, I thought your poem was really good. I didn't see what you thought was so bad about the last verse. And secondly, poetry isn't my forte, but ...