thedelphinater

Yeah, I get the whole Disney Channel/Hannah Montana/Miley Cyrus/Whatever her name is/Jonas Brothers conversation all the time. I want to ask the people who are talking to me about it ...

So far as the title goes, it's not too bad, I've seen worse. I can't really help you there, because it's your song, and the title means whatever you want ...

Pretty! This was really nice, and wasn't that fuzzy. The left side, espicially the mountains in the back, were a little bit hazy, but other than that, I couldn't find ...

Cool! Not quite sure what they were all pictures of, but they came out really awesome. I liked the fifth one with the cobweb. Anyway, who knew random objects could ...

I can so relate. I basically had no really good friends until last year, and even now my circle is pretty limited. I too, feel the pain of being quiet, ...

Not bad. I liked that it wasn't your typical mushy love song, but more I really wish I didn't love you, but I do, and that makes me mad. It ...

HIII!!!!!!! Ahem, sorry about that, loopy on cold medicine. Anyway, this was pretty good, but I definitely agree with Claeren on the whole rhythm and flow thing. I too was ...

Aww, this was sweet! I couldn't really find anything wrong with it, I just have a few suggestions. I'm not so sure of this is really an error, but I ...

I didn't think it was as bad as you said. I mean, I can tell it was written in a hurry because there were a few little mistakes, but plot ...

I'm currently reading (though of course not at this moment since I'm writing here) Terry Pratchett's Equal Rites. Yay! I loved that book! Scratch that, I love all his books. ...

May need some major grammatical help. R for brief language, not that anyone really cares. Do you know what it's like to be a little kid living in a house ...

I really liked this. I mean, "See Emily Play" is my favorite Pink Floyd song, which is very cliche since my name is Emily, but, I really don't care. I ...

This was one of the funniest things I've read in a long time! I was laughing almost the entire time. I know that it gets a bit more serious during ...

This was good. I got the sense of a bard reciting this in like the Middle ages or something. I don't know, maybe I'm weird, or maybe that's what you ...

Umm, this was confusing. The transitions are a bit too harsh and frequent for the reader to tell what's going on. The writing itself is good, just a the plot ...