thecamillecalalas

First story I've read here in YWS that has a lot of humor! Now, the title makes sense to me and everything. This is so fun to read. I can't ...

Well, the moment I started reading this, I thought it's just a letter, and I was right. But yeah, it has a story. It's just that you made it seem ...

This is awesomely mad. This is a perfect piece for a monologue, for someone who wants to join a Talent Show. I don't think I could write a better piece ...

First, I suggest that you try working on how you start your story. Remember that the first paragraph of any literary piece should grab the interest of the readers. Practice ...

I couldn't argue anymore about this poem. All I can say is, "Amen". Keep inspiring your readers! :)

Sweet!!:) That's all I can say. *grins

This story is heavy, really heavy. And you've made it seem like, you're capable enough to be in this level. I see no doubt from you as you wrote the ...

"The author can always wear a mask."

please follow!! :)

This is the kind of piece I'm sure teenagers will choose to read. I like the way you made Jared a sweet, loving, and lonely friend. I know all your ...

Hi! Thank you for the reviews on the 1st part of this story. I really appreciated those. I just started here in YWS and I already got those reviews, so ...

This is sad. And you had successfully managed to make your readers feel that "this is going to be a sad story" since the beginning. Your words are wonderful, too. ...

Melissa Suarez woke up blinded by the bright ray of light. She slowly opened her eyes. It came from the glass window with its curtains up. She closed her eyes ...

Hi, my name is Camille. Cam for short. This site is suggested by my friend and classmate, Katherine. She wrote a short story that was once featured here, A Walk ...