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Sorry I wasn't able to write for quite a long time. I've been so busy with school. But I believe I can still catch up. :) I looked at my ...

I couldn't quite understand why Veronica's ring caught my attention. I guessed it was ancient, but it was so beautiful. It looked dangerously beautiful. She said it was lent by ...

Maya Crawford I skipped class again. I just couldn't stand learning my craft without feeling the pain of losing... Dianara. She was my personal trainer. My only friend. The only ...

I put on my makeup I laughed with my friends I felt carefree But I saw no you I prayed I hoped I crossed my fingers But I saw no ...

Name: Maya Crawford Gender: Female Age: 18 Appearance: long dark straight hair, fair and translucent skin, wide brown eyes, thin lips, long nose, defined cheekbones and jawline. Maya is slim ...

Part One- Part Two- “Where’s sir Tony?” Melissa asked, wondering where their coach is. She had agreed to meet with her Math Team and their coach after second period. “He ...

Honestly, I felt butterflies in my tummy while I was reading this story. Even though I haven't read Part One, this piece already made me blush especially with this line: ...

Hey, you've got a great piece here! I like fantasy stories, and this one indeed gave me the feeling that I was reading one, like when I was into fairy ...

Hi there! Well, I can't quite tell if you have improved on this part for I haven't read the first part. But still, I think I'm catching up. You really ...

This story is sooo good. The lines are all powerful and it's narrated very well. This is the best piece I've read here, so far. Keep up the good work!! ...

'Twas in a broad afternoon breeze, that I found myself strolling in the school oval grounds playing with the grasshoppers hopping nowhere. Fate seemed to tell me to glance from ...

This is like a monologue, for me. The idea of this story is good. The way you portrayed your character is convincing, which is also a good sign. But I ...

Well, you're really a writer. There's creativity in your story and I like your choice of words. But I think you overdid making sentences short. Short sentences are a must ...

Hello everyone! Thank you for the reviews. I did some editing on this piece and I'd be glad if you check this piece again if there have been improvements. Also, ...

Hello :) First, I can say that the start of the story is really good. I was like, WOW. I caught a glimpse of your age on the left pane ...