thealmightypencil

Thank you for all 3 of those wonderful reviews! I am totally elated that you enjoyed it so much!

Thank you for the review and comments! After performing it, I would have to agree that it doesn't quite make a great slam poem. Many were confused.

Thank you for the lovely comments! We performed it for our English class, but there were a few interruptions. I'd love to perform it again.

No problem!

It's no problem at all! :)

Thank you! I'm glad my writing was enjoyable and informative.

Thank you for such a glowing review!

Thank you for your kinds words! Encouragement is just as important as criticism. And don't worry, I was nervous about reviews when I started too, but you'll get the hang ...

I'm glad I was helpful! And I understand your reasoning for the "her body" part. You mentioned this is a part of a larger story. If a reader had read ...

I really love this poem, especially as a former metal mouth myself! I didn't make this a formal review because I only have one nitpick. There's not a single period ...

Thanks for the comments!

Thank so much for the feedback! I really appreciate your thoughts because I have trouble remembering that the reader doesn't know everything I know as the writer. I'll keep your ...

Thanks for the nitpicks! I'm terrible at proof reading my own writing. And I'm glad you enjoyed it! I definitely plan to keep writing.

Thank you for your thoughts! I will be sure to fix that mistake.

Wow, thank you for the feedback! I looked over the google doc and found it very helpful. I plan on reading it in depth and revising my story when I ...