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Re: Cold Blood
Hi Peoples! This is the_bronze_pen. I deleted my short Cold Blood and I wrote it as a novel and this is just the first chapter. I changed it from third ...
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: Removed #7
I really like this story! Even though this piece is so short, I think it was really, truly amazing. Even though you entered it to a contest, I think you ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: My Fire (edited)
PM me if you like this story! __________________________________________________________________ Once upon a time, there was a beautiful, unfortunately self-centered princess. Her name was Sky, and he
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Ink Catcher
I did not find a lot of errors, spelling wise, but I did have one confusion. Was the book he was looking for named Mrs. Guardian or is that the ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Travel Writing By Abigail Eastham
This story is not fantasy!
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: My Fire
PM me if you like this story! _________________________________________________________________________________________________ Once upon a time, there was a beautiful, unfortunately self-centered-sat
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: A Brave Knight
PM me if you really like this story! ______________________________________________________________________________ There once was a boy, who lived a long time ago, on the edge of a kingdom named Myf.
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Cold Blood
I really don’t care about grammar… as long as you like my story! ______________________________________________________________________________ “Ouch!”Annaleigh felt the bat bite. She felt
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Dear Sister and Brother
I thought this story was amazing and that it could be a good book of letters. I noticed a few spelling errors, but as you said, you did not care ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: About a Mill Girl
You see a mother sick. Her hair has lost its color, her face looks like a ghost, and blood is streaming from her left hand. She is laying her in ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Blood, Water and Tears
I loved this poem! I was not around during Hurricane Katrina (taking notice that I live in Vermont), but I know what suffering people had to do. I think this ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Purple Magic: Chapter 1
I totally agree with Storm_Bringer. What is a deihher? That part really did confuse me.
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Illusion
I am afraid to admit it, but I am a Twilight fan as well. I just have a few little things that really confused me. You said that the next ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Is this not love?
I thought this poem really does tell what love really is like.
Apr 2, 2009