the-rainbow-dreamer

thanks everyone for reviewing :) I will take note of everything you say you've been a great help :)

I suppose it is possible that it could have happened. Well thought about I thought. I think Ravenclaw was a Eagel, not a raven. Just watch out for capital letters ...

It brought a tear to my eye..... Well I thought the part when George saw Fred's body was very good because it showed us how he felt when he saw ...

That was so cute!!! I do normally read Ron and Hermione fanfiction but I will now because those two are really meant for eachother. You described the feelings and setting ...

The last line added to the tension I thought. You use a lot of descriptive words e.g. Her corpse lying on the drawing room floor, her left side caked with ...

I loved the quote: Three times he checked for a pulse. Three times in vain. It was well written. Very descriptive. I could feel his pain and the flashback added ...

Chapter 1 - Goodbyes _ As Harry, Ron and Hermione left the headmaster’s office they realised that the war wasn’t totally over. So many lives were lost, Remus, Tonks, Fred, ...

Chapter 1: Bitten ___________________________________________ It all started on a cold, wet winter night when Remus was only a small boy of 5. He did not understand what was worrying his ...

hi im new here and love to read fanfiction. e.g. harry potter