the-candyman

good job you did a good job proof reading i only have two questions Kwest walked out of his plain room, much like the one he’d had on Zorrac, but ...

A New Me Is this what I really want? A new life? A new me? If that’s what I want, What I would choose, Would I be happy in someone ...

At first, when he was in the Maragos Assembly, his corruptoin had been small: a pork addendum to a bill here and there for his constituents, justified in his mind ...

Last he saw himself begining his journey, setting off for the deathly cliff which he was about to climb, never dreaming something like this would occur. begining should be beginning ...

Him Who is this dear man, you ask? I like this part because i was actually thinking about who it could be. I'm not sure if theres a need for ...

hey great job the only way thats its like Harry Potter is that her parents are dead, she has a crecsent on her forehead instead of a lightning bolt and ...

youre doing great im not good at proof reading but i had one question. [quote="Dynamo] While the others were occupying Biggs Tylor battled Wedge. He isn’t like any other Galbian ...