the-candyman

[quote="Poltergiest"]It made you think but was simple at the same time.[quote] i find that as a great way to explain this poem.

Great job i really like it. I sang it in my head theres so many ways it can be sang :smt044

one question. What genre would you put this under? :smt044

hey great job the only way thats its like Harry Potter is that her parents are dead, she has a crecsent on her forehead instead of a lightning bolt and ...

I like it. Its good but its also kind of scary :smt044

very funny. You made me imagine Abe break dancing its really funny :smt044

youre doing great im not good at proof reading but i had one question. [quote="Dynamo] While the others were occupying Biggs Tylor battled Wedge. He isn’t like any other Galbian ...

great job i dont understand how in the story it says Lin Jee is greedy but he wont do the deal because of honor :smt044

wow that was great. not much action but the fights were funny and i know there will be more action in the next chapter

thanks i think i understand a lmost everything now

great job i couldn't find chpt 1 though i even checked you're portfolio pm me and tell me what happens please

mango

hi im jared im 13years old and im new at this i like sudoku a lot and hopefully you'll see me on the top ten soon. my friends who told ...

i love sudoku i started three days a go and im on game 8

hey welcome to yws its lots o fun i cant wait to read your stories