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Re: Toy Guns
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Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (1.1)
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Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (1)
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Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: A Soul Named Lily (1 - Liam)
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Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: A Little Thing Called Life
I don't get along with poetry. So please ignore anything that sounds odd to you, because I have no idea what I'm talking about. Night confronted her adversary, Intrepid, A ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 17)
This is the second fourth of my review. Why am I starting with the second instead of the first? I'm cool like that. Actually, I'm a total loser and accidentally ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Carry me Home Chapter 3
(I think IcyFlame got most of my nitpicks for the first part.) Hannah and I looked at each other for a second without saying anything. And then we both exploded ...
Jul 16, 2011 -
Re: April
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Re: The Birds and the Bees
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Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Urbanization
Poetry and I don't get along... But this reminded me of a song and I'm not just going to put the song here because that's weird so I'll review this ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: The Face that I Remember
I hardly ever read poetry. I definitely don't review it. But today's all sorts of weird, and I figured I might as well give it a shot... And in such ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 2
“My dad texted me.” She said and then looked up. -Comma. (Don't capitalize "She", comma after "said".) “You do realize she’s going to want to kill me now, right?” I ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 2
Her driveway was full of cars, none of which I could really see since it had grown dark outside during the drive. -The way you say "none of which I ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: A Soul Named Lily (0 - Before)
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Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: One Time Only
Sorry this took a while. Minor headache. I just want to say that I don't know what this sounds like to you, so if any of the changes I suggest ...
Jul 2, 2011