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wow, whoever this girl or woman is, she really is down in the dumps haha. i thought the armor begining to crack part was actually quite good, it shows that ...

different, sounds like one of mine when i first started writing poetry. would i be right in guessing that this poem took you a short space of time to write. ...

haha, i remember buying this book at Waterstones on a '2 books for £10 offer". at first i thought, maybe this isn't for me so i put it down (and ...

really good book that one. can't say i cried at all but i did enjoy it. i'm not a fast reader so it probably took me more than twice what ...

nice poem. i liked the imagery in there. and your rhyme shceme was quite good too. very good write. like i said, the imagery was exellent and i could see ...

the first thing i noticed was the images and pictures that sub-concieously came into my head, i was very impressed. the cave seemed to be like a tamed beast in ...

this is a great poem from what seems to be a great writer. this is truly amazing. every line is perfect, every sylable, every rhyme. not heard a poem this ...

this is an exellent poem, especially for your first. I'll start with the not so good: first of all, the rhyming was, at some points a little bit like you ...

a decent poem, i think maybe working on your use of sylables could be your next task if thats the type of poetry this is. the title says it all ...

really good, i got what you were saying. but like the other comment said, you need to find a way to make the repetition work

This really was a good write, liked the amount of description you put in

A man ran into his house And said to his wife and kin. 'To the shelter we must go my loves Or the bombs will crush us in' The family ...

As I go bare foot across the beach, I see a grain of sand. A man comes forth as if to teach, And quickly grabs my hand. “Don’t touch the ...

Really not bad at all man, really good Phil

Introduction In the beginning a war broke out between two of the largest and grandest kingdoms around, Kirpha and Sprosta. The conflict started because the kings of the time both ...