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to be honist, it was a little short; that's not always a bad thing, but in this case, i think you should expand on the poem. like another reviewer said, ...

very good, very enjoyable. i enjoyed reading this piece, it was a good way to start the story. i now want to hear more. the charcacters were very good and ...

erm, yeah. i think so, ive just checked and they had it.

hi mortimer. haha, i'm new to YWS too. i've been on here for about a week now. it's quite good you know. there's loads of different things to look and ...

quite a good story, it does have potential. there were four main problems i found with it though: 1: the king; he seems to be over the top with his ...

well, it looks like the start of a crazy story. the writing must have been good, because i could see everything that was happening, the girl screaming, the blood on ...

wow, a great write and what seems to be the start of a great story. i don't think there were any mistakes at all. i really do want to here ...

hi creativefreak, i'll be your reviewer today. really did like this one. especially the first five lines, i think they were my favorite. and the situation you talked about is ...

verry good poem, it was really in depth and created a horrific and believable picture. the best part for me, and i don't know why, was when you said and ...

Some people look out to the mountains, Down the valleys and up the streams. The rain falls like water from fountains, And sits on the ground whilst it gleams. Then ...

In a wooden chest, on a wooden floor, In a wooden room with a wooden door, In the wooden chest, there’s a wooden drawer, With many strange folders, in fact ...

quite a good poem i'de say, the rhyme scheme seemed to work quite well. the problem i had was the length of the poem, it really was too long, but ...

CHAPTER 1 - MARTHA - Martha woke up to the same scene she had done everyday of her life, the inside of a large, old, light brown tent. She ...

CHAPTER 2 - VIRTUS - The town of Lemar was bustling on this fine, sun filled day. Eyeing up all the goods and gawping at the large variety of weaponry ...

the most famous ones i think are: william wordsworth, carol ann frank, ts elliot, william shakespear and there's loads more but i can't think of thier names