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Ok, guys. This is just an extract - the first few paragraphs - which I'm not sure about. I don't know if what I'm saying makes sense. Or whether it's ...

Very good read, I was really impressed :) I actually chose to read this because it sounded like something different, which is cool!! :) So I started reading, and it's ...

Hi Gheala. I think with this version, you gave your characters even more depth and texture. I felt for them both, once again. This version is definitely better and I ...

Hi Gheala. As you know, I'm not one for nitpicking and commenting on grammar, so I'll stick to what I like, reading. By that, I mean, what I felt and ...

Wild yellow grass stooped under its own weight, sagging more and more as it got nearer to the edge of the shallow pool. The pool was still and stagnant, and ...

Got to say, Gheala- I'm glad you told me about this one. I just read through it and will start the review in a second but I have to say ...

I liked this a lot. Although, some of the lines could do with being more matched, syllable wise. I think that as you've made a nice cute poem that rhymes, ...

Hmmm, very mysterious -- I like that :) This is a good poem you have here. I liked it a lot. Although I would say: I feel Sad It was ...

I think it started out quite good but you lost it slightly near the end. One thing I didn't like though, and it actually doesn't matter, is that you've put ...

Oh wow, this is great and a perfect time to upload it too. I really can't tell you how good this is, there weren't any points I can make about ...

Thank you everybody for your great reviews. They are really appreciated.

This probably isn't really poetry. It's more a speech than anything. Anyway, hope you enjoy it. How do we define the word, 'life'? Is it just the period between birth ...

Hi, just found a great review you did. So I was wondering if you wouldn't mind reviewing a chapter or two of a fantasy story I'm writing called Empire. Here's ...

As always, here's my compositions for the Empire story on YouTube. Okrol and Arboar entered the herbalist's shop briskly, the sun glowing warmly on their backs. Okrol's spirits had been ...

If you enjoy reading Okrol's story, please click the link below to see my compositions for him. Okrol didn't spend long in the inn's small bedroom. He waited only five ...