thanatosdeath

Rhymes well, and the last lines were well put...Erm...I guess that's all I have to say... Death

I'd say a nice play of words...Dramatic is all over this...Well that was stupid...Otherwise why would it be in here?...All mistakes I caught and suggestions have been made by others... ...

...Nice humor...Not my type of poem, but it was still good. I showed it to my friends and they laughed wildly...Heh...Heh, heh...Erm... Death

Sheesh. So many negative vibes in these poems...Heh, I wish I found this place sooner. Anyways I loved how you played the words, I didn't catch much mistakes, probably cause ...

Rawr. Dang I wish yhou were in my poetry nice...The mistakes I caught were already posted by the others so I won't bother...But Pm me some time...I thnk we'd be ...

Ah, yes. Purple, a color of beauty and of the reasons I'm goth..*snicker*. I luuuurved it!!! Any mistakes I didn't catch actually, so maybe they were covered by everyone else...Hopefully... ...

It was good, but I agree with the others...Lining was terrble. Got me cofused really...Yer gonna wanta check that... Death

Hmmm...You definetly will need to check on puntuation and such...(ignore possible(probably is) bad spelling right now...I is in a hurry...). It's good, but a little sloppy, so you might want ...

Sheesh. Seems like Tamora pretty much covered everthing huh? So I guess you'll just have to listen to her...I like it...A lot...Seeing I love negative vibes and everythings, but don't ...

Oooooh. Very good. I like that kind of...I don't know sad kind of tone to it...But hey, I'm goth, I'm like that! Anyways, I don't think I saw ay spelling ...