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Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
Glasses
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Re: The Showing vs. Telling Game
She waited in the reception area. It was a sorry excuse for an airport, just a strip of tarmac and a cabin -sized terminal. But she didn't notice that, didn't ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
dork
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Two Droplets on the Lilypad
Good story. Confusing a lot of the time, but good. The line "as sure as there are words on this page" sounded very poetic, it pulled me right in. and ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: The Demon Stirs - Prologue
WOW. That was an amazing (if somewhat stereotypical of high fantasy) prologue. I started reading it thinking it would be just another LOTR remake where the two dominant races were ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Short Story: The Enchanter's House
Thanks for all the reviews you guys!! First of all, I agree that the ending is gruesome. If when I expand this story, I will work on this. I don't ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: ThE wOrLd oF wEirD
Why do all the interesting storybooks have to be dead?? Enough of this. BUMP Name: Prince Stephan of Emslan Age: 16 Appearance: Almost flawless slightly tanned skin, creamy blondish hair ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Sonnet: Seas of Iron, Skies of Soot
Thanks for the review! I know my poem doesn't quite fit the "iambic pentameter" or whatever it's called. I didn't want to be too precise, or else I don't think ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Sonnet: Seas of Iron, Skies of Soot
Here's a sonnet I wrote based on my dreams... Seas of Iron, Skies of Soot In the days of old, I’ve often stood, Beneath many a hallowed ceiling. And I’ve ...
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Re: The Santa Tournament
Great story! Now I'm dying to know who the second winner was...Jack Frost? The plot seemed kind of confusing at first, did the judges know exactly what they wanted Santa ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Short Story: The Enchanter's House
Thanks for the review! I wrote this story for a contest a little while ago and the submissions had to be under 500 words. Count 'em, there's EXACTLY 500. :) ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Short Story: The Enchanter's House
The Enchanter’s House Adam awoke. He got up, stretched, and looked out the window. While he was occupied with the breathtaking view of the mountains and forest, his bedside table ...
Jan 10, 2010
