tgirly

Spectacle. Bernie Sanders supporter. Lima bean.

Conversing with a Hurricane: A Ballad Her name's Katrina, so they say, (I won't go. I won't go.) and that soon I'll get to meet her if I won't go. ...

9/10 for content, but 7/10 for wording. The phrase "priests branding everyone Marked as a witch of incomplete faith" is a bit confusing and unclear as to what you're trying ...

7.5/10. It's well written, and I can already see the conflict forming, and am wondering about the relationship between her and her sister, but I think there could be more ...

"Eat, drink, and be merry, brother. For tomorrow, we die." "No. Tomorrow, we fight to finally live ." I came up with that a year ago and it's kinda cheesy, ...

You know you're a writer when, once you're head hits the pillow, you aren't getting up if the house burnt down, but you'll still roll over, feel around for your ...

3/10. You might thinks that's cruel, but it's my own work. I'm not really sure what I want to do with this. It's very sarcastic. He was teetering at the ...

8/10. It left me with a lot of questions; one of which is how can the story continue if our narrator just got killed? I wish the voice was described ...

10/10 I love how the main character has recieved something seemingly good, but is distressed about it. Awesomeness. Ylla and Whita were known for being odd. Instead of living near ...

Audra- Name it Fluffy McFluffins and beg to keep it, then pout when she can't. (She's six; what do you expect?) What would your charactor do if they suddenly had ...

If at first you don't succeed, you're not Chuck Norris.

When life gives you oranges, go and steal someone else's lemons.

WWYCD if time stopped for everyone but them and no one but them could move?

8/10. A bit too many adjectives about the sky, and you have silent and silently. You should probably cut one out. Sorry it's two sentences, but the first doesn't have ...

"I know I just met you, but will you marry me?"