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Re: Title Feedback
One-word-titles aren't my cup of tea, just because I find them not descriptive enough to necessarily elicit curiosity on their own merit. Having said that, I believe this title doesn't ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Title Feedback
I'm going to be a bit biased on this, because personally, I think the one-word-adjective titles are a bit overdone (e.g.: Lost, Frozen, Matched (which I get is debateably a ...
May 11, 2016 -
Re: Short story challenge
Spectacle. Bernie Sanders supporter. Lima bean.
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: What does this username make you think of?
A witty Dutch person with a love of puns and shoes.
Apr 10, 2016 -
Re: The "I wrote a poem, but don't need reviews" thread
Conversing with a Hurricane: A Ballad Her name's Katrina, so they say, (I won't go. I won't go.) and that soon I'll get to meet her if I won't go. ...
Apr 2, 2016 -
Re: Pitch Feedback
9/10 for content, but 7/10 for wording. The phrase "priests branding everyone Marked as a witch of incomplete faith" is a bit confusing and unclear as to what you're trying ...
Mar 30, 2016 -
Re: Pitch Feedback
7.5/10. It's well written, and I can already see the conflict forming, and am wondering about the relationship between her and her sister, but I think there could be more ...
Mar 29, 2016 -
Re: The After Watch
*Polishes helmet*. I'm in!!!!!! Though I might not be as active during the initial onslaught, I shall lend my support in the days that follow.
Jul 26, 2014 -
Re: The After Watch
Great job fellow Knights! I also participated in this noble mission! :)
Jul 8, 2014 -
Re: Knights of the Green Room Great Hall
Knight Tallygirl would like to report the earning of a gorgeous, purple helmet, complete with a crest of peacock feathers.
Jul 2, 2014 -
Re: New Badge Ideas
It would be cool to have a Sentry Badge for the After Watch members.
Jul 2, 2014 -
Re: Tgirly's Log
But her peacock plume trails on the ground. What can she do to keep it from getting dirty? An idea comes! A horse would offer sufficient height for her gleaming ...
Jul 1, 2014 -
Re: Knights of the Green Room Great Hall
Good job, icannothear! You can put that 11th review into getting your sword (which you get after fifteen reviews, so now you just need four more green room reviews.) Hannah ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Tgirly's Log
Tallygirl has earned a sword with the might of the pen and a shield taken from a vanquished foes slayed in the misty woods of the After Watch's War. But ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: The After Watch
Okay; thanks! :)
Jun 30, 2014
