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Re: Dance
Wild, rapid movements, With which I express myself. There's nothing That can hold me back or stop me. A true expression of my character, Down to the basics, You can ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Hunted ch. 4
We couldn't find a car to steal so we hitchiked again. It's been a couple days later and we just passed the border into Utah. The days have settled into ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Runaway Elements (full)
I was heading towards the ocean. I couldn't think of anywhere better to head, so I was heading that way. It was raining. I stopped to look up into the ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Hunted ch. 3
The farmer and Charlie strike up a conversation about something or other. I stare out the window, watching the landscape and thinking and daydreaming. He drops us off in some ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: The Escapees
Vi: I was getting less confident about our plans (if you could even call it a plan) of escape by the minute. First we were following the new girl Storm ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Runaway Elements (full)
Name: Eve Zinck Age: 16 Element: Water Appearance: Her hair is dyed blue though she doesn't remember dying it. She's not sure what her real hair color is. She is ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Runaway Elements (full)
Sorry, I didn't know Birdy gave me a spot and then I was on a plane all day yesterday. I'll get it up as soon as I have a chance.
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Amazement
You should break the lines up into smaller lines so it'll flow better. I liked it, though, in my opinion, it may have been a little repetitive. You should do ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Random Word Game!!!
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Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Can we get 2000 replies before Christmas?
The average person swallows two spiders in their sleep each year. How do they test these things? 3
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: The Escapees
One of the guy hands a gun to me and says, "Just point and click. Oh, and brace for a little bit of recoil." Like I don't know how to ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Hunted ch. 2
One shoplifting and a raid of some person's freezer later, we are dressed in dryed clothes and eating ice cream out of the carton in a park. Charlie isn't talking ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Confusion
It says: My anger portrayed, My feelings hidden away. But isn't anger a feeling? It seems to be contradicting. I really liked the poem though. My favorite lines are "Words ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Music
I feel like the poem didn't really have any flow, and was just a long list of words. Wow, that sounds harsher than I meant it to. They're very good ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: The Escapees
Vi: "Woah!" I said while taking a step back. What had just happened?! I asked myself, one of the boys had just shot out some sort of lightning thing from ...
Jun 19, 2011
