tgirly

I like it a lot, and I like the words in parenthases at the end of each stanza. My only critic is maybe you should change the (About me) to ...

I think it would flow a little better if instead of Which now look a bit more encouraging and bright, it was Which now look a bit more bright. I ...

I like the poem, though I think you should break the stanzas up a little more.

I really liked the poem. I thought it was deep and philosophical. I like how the poems flow together. However, I think that you could improve on the first poem's ...

Yeah, looking back, undestand isn't the right word. I like the poem a lot. I agree with tydecker777 that it's unique. That's more of what I was trying to get ...

I thought this was sooo funny!

I like this piece because it's so real. I like how you wrote it as if you were talking to her. I like the philisophicalness of it. It's very well ...

I liked the story. I feel like it's the first chapter of a story rather than a stand-alone story, though. I would read the next chapter, if it was. I ...

You have really long paragraphs. You need to break them up more so it's easier to read.

I'm glad you continued to write the story. You're right, it doesn't matter if anyone else liked it. It only matters if you liked it and are proud of it. ...

The sun's warmth, not the suns warmth. There were some other spelling mistakes, but I can't remember them. I didn't read the first chapter, but it's not confusing to me, ...

It's interesting, but confusing because of all the grammer and spelling errors. The beginning didn't hook me, but that might have been because of the spelling errors. It's a good ...

You are about to be reviewed by a member of Team Yellow. I like this story, but I think you should break it into stanzas. Congrats on your grammer, I ...

I like the poem. I like the end. Oh please, just go. Go away. Love that. I think it would flow better if instead of Yours is the face that ...

I like the title Angel because if it was anything different, the story wouldn't make any sense. If it wasn't Angel, then you'd think that she was just taking credit ...