tgirly

My older sister's middle name is Christina. I like Lois Lowry too, though I've only read The Giver (loved it) and right now I'm reading Gathering Blue. I only have ...

Eve: I groan as I begin to wake up. My head hurts awfully. Wolf's shaking me, which makes my head hurt worse. "Stop," I groan. He stops. I squint at ...

Birth control, but NOT abortions.

We finally see a small town on the horizon. Charlie's been complaining for the last couple hours about his feet. He's not use to walking this far. He breaks into ...

Hey, pretty good start for a poem and I like the theme. It reminds me a little bit of the song Fireflies (love that song). So on to the review; ...

My mouth tasted sour just seeing from a distance the tatoo on Talia's neck. It reminded me of something I'd heard in school forever ago, about how the Nazi's did ...

I feel that the question at the beginning should be seperate from the rest of the paragraph. I do like it a lot. I thinkg you should edit it a ...

Eve: I knew that people were creeping around us. I could sense the water in their blood and perspiration on their faces. But I couldn't do anything about it because ...

15-year-old (I think) Bill has been chased since he was seven (I think) and he doesn't know why, or who, or how. Then he meets Charlie, who's also being chased. ...

My favorite line is the last line: "Where I’m too safe and sound." I like that a lot. I don't think there should be a comment between "Sprinting" and "freely. ...

Your welcome, it definitely has more flow now. Good job. I LOVE your avvie! :P -tgirly

(OOC umm isn't "Rain" supposed to be Storm? :) Rain is in Runaway Elements.)

I like this piece a lot. Even though it's so short, it's unique and I love the imagery and metaphor. I think that Shipwrecked Love might be too long a ...

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It's where I retreat And where I explore, It's where we met And where you left. It's when I taught you To dance, And when you learned to Cry. It's ...