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(OOC: I'm not really sure how to start...)

Eve: I went into the room where Rain and Wolf were. "How's Arthur? Is Lidz really captured?" Rain asked. "Yeah, he's fine," I said, "How's Wolf?" Rain shrugged. "We don't ...

(OOC: Someone, write something!)

I like it, but at first I wasn't show how to read it. But that it probably me just being stupid :P I really liked it, and knowing that you ...

I don't understand the first line of the second stanza. "He doesn't seems to step back To take a look back and reconsider To admire the beauty he is leaving ...

I like it. It's deep. My only nitpick is in the first stanza, instead of "plane," it should be "plain." Unless you mean "plane" as in the geometrical plane. Other ...

Nathaniel: I was listening in on a conversation. It was the most interesting thing I'd heard in years. Someone had escaped? At first, I'd marked it off as one of ...

I like it, it's pretty good for a three-year-old. My only nitpick is that you spelled beasts wrong. You put "beats." Other than that, it's pretty good spelling and grammer. ...

I like it, it's funny and fun. There's just two things though. It says he layed in the snow, smelling dirt. Wouldn't he be smelling snow? And the second is ...

It's interesting, but I don't feel like the last paragraph goes with the rest. I like the last paragraph, though. I think you could probably work on making the last ...

Mitch has done two hours worth of driving in half an hour. She slows down to the speed limit. Everyone relaxes a bit. "Mitch," Silas says, "pull over here." "Why?" ...

I really like it, it's really sweet. I think, though, that in the first line, you should take out one of the "red"s because you have two of them. It's ...

Turn doorknob, Stopped. Locked. Swear. Stare. Click! Kick! Door open Bones broken, Steal guard's pass, Now run fast, I'm free! Almost, Not yet. Fence Electric. Big sigh Got to fly. ...

A sentence is a beautiful thing, So many rules, Yet so little restraints. Always a verb, Yet it can be totally still. Created with words, Made with feelings, Ancient, Yet ...

LOL! I love it! It's funny and I like the two last stanzas the best, when you making fun of rap and then I like the line that says, "Whistle ...