tgirly

Just one thing. In the second paragraph, I suppose you mean "I THOUGHT you'd figure out that he" instead of though. Other than that, I didn't see any mistakes, beside ...

I don't know why The Sun rises everyday To kiss the mourning Sky, And when clouds come, Threatening tears It sends a ray of light, To brush the sorrow aside. ...

(Will be gone for three days. Is this going to be another massive everyone out again?)

(Will be gone for three days.)

Wow I love this storry line so far. It kept my attention through the whole chapter. You should probablly look through it again to catch some spelling mistakes like; "blick" ...

I don't know which one to click, because they don't talk, but they definitely have their own personalities, and I learn more about them as I write.

Nathaniel: Visiting hours. Not really my thing, because I didn't have any friends to visit. I kept to myself and faded into the background. It's not as boring as it ...

Eve: "Let's find that weapon and destroy it, for Seshat's sake. I don't want her death to be in vain. We have to find that weapon before someone else does," ...

Vi: It was going to take awhile for Storm to wake up, but I didn't know if we had time. I motioned for everyone to get into the room, then ...

I'm an INF sometimes J, sometimes P myself. I write because I can't remember ever NOT wanting to write. Rate: It depends. Sometimes it's really fast and sometimes, I just ...

Eve: Razi came out of his cocoon. He kissed me! And I kissed him back. I entangled my fingers in his hair. I savored the moment. It was beyond words. ...

Eve: I walked to the edge of the farthest ring of ghostfire. They surrounded a tree. "Razi," I said. The cocoon shuddered. The ghostfires cleared a path for me. I ...

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Eve: I heard Lidz's voice in my head. I glanced around, looking for Lidz, but she wasn't there. "Guys, Wolf... I'll explain later, but Wolf's power is going to ... ...

(OOC: Okay, I can change it.) Dmitri: I sit in the window of my apartment, the glass was broken out long ago. Nothing like the comforts of the other side. ...