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Dmitri: I slump down by the door and get ready to spend the night there. I'm not worried about being gone before the sun goes down. I probably won't be ...

OOC: Kaida and Maryx aren't in the resistance yet, Tyr is leaving the group, and everyone else is in the hideout I think.

Theresa: I noticed Tyr heading out. We were supposed to follow the buddy system. He couldn't just leave like that. I followed him out, jogging to catch up. "Go back ...

Name: Theresa Age: 14 Gender: Female Mouse-brown, straight hair that's a little longer than average length. She has hazel eyes and a few freckles. She wears thin glasses. Theresa is ...

I like this poem. I like how it makes you feel like so much is happening, but at the same time like so little is happening. My one critique would ...

I wanted more. If there isn't a limit, I'd make it longer, if I were you. I like it lot, but I'm not sure if the first stanza describes confusion ...

I like it. My only problem is that the flow seems a little erratic in parts, I feel like the "a" at the end of the line is kinda isolated. ...

You have a few words that rhyme in the poem, which is a little distracting. I like the poem, and what you're saying. It makes complete sense, and I could ...

Mitch is silent for awhile, as if she's trying to get all her thoughts in order. "Do you remember when you had to have testing? Like, genetically?" she asks. "Yep," ...

Dmitri: I see a girl emerge from a side alley. Next to her side trots a wolf. I've never seen one before. I duck into a doorway, hoping she won't ...

Name: Chance Harrington Age: 9 Gender Male Appearence: Chance has chocolate brown hair and amber eyes. When he's determined or angry, his eyes seem to darken. He has freckles and ...

Vi: I could tell Leroy didn't think I was competent. That was okay with me, I didn't care what he thought. I didn't think he was competent. There's something about ...

Did no one get the Christian theme? It was kinda subtle... Maybe too subtle. Thanks for the reviews, though.

I take back what I said in the prologue about the tone being monotonous. I don't know what I was thinking! I usually don't read something this long online, but ...

Forgot to mention: love the title!!! It's what got me interested in it in the beginning.