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  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: The Realisation

    BTW: it's spelled Realization, not Realisation. And welcome to YWS! :)

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: The Realisation

    At the beginning, everything is in past-tense, but then the last half is in present tense. I have trouble remembering to keep in the same tense too, and it's easily ...

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: And We Sit.

    The world is traveling Miles and miles a second And we just sit. Time is flying So fast we can't see it Go by. And we sit. Why? Why don't ...

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Archive Re: Two Spirits, One goal[accepting]

    Dmitri: I wake with a groan. The girl with the tiger and her friend are either gone, or hiding. Arwen's head is on my knees. a burst of panic spurts ...

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Hook. Chapter 2.

    I can't wait for the next chapter, you definitely know how to keep someone interested. My only critique is that it might be a tad bit repetitive, with him knocking ...

    Oct 9, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Hunted ch. 22

    We find a gas station and grab a few of the gas cans outside and fill them with gas from the pumps. As we start to walking away, a greasy ...

    Oct 8, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Hunted ch. 21

    The feeling disappears as the day begins. The morning is pretty uneventful. We change out of our wet clothes into our previously-wet-now-dry clothes. We stop at a Burger King and ...

    Oct 7, 2011
  • Archive Re: Two Spirits, One goal[accepting]

    Dmitri: I let Arwen's hand slip out of mine, so I can get into a defensive stance. She starts moving away from me. The wolf follows her. I realize what ...

    Oct 6, 2011
  • Archive Re: Two Spirits, One goal[accepting]

    Dmitri: I can't think. My brains are scrambled. I can barely breathe. What just happened? Did Arwen... kiss me? This was getting all too confusing, too strange. I had to ...

    Oct 6, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: URGENT! Animals Missing From Your Area!

    We dissected fetal pigs. People really dissect CATS?!!? That's awful!

    Oct 5, 2011
  • Archive Re: Runaway Elements (full)

    OOC: Leo is the bad guy who is Wolf's twin brother. We discovered that we're each the Incarnate of our Element and came into our full elemental potential in various ...

    Oct 5, 2011
  • Archive Re: Two Spirits, One goal[accepting]

    Dmitri: Arwen slips her hand into mine. Her fingers were thin and fit so well in mine. I tried to remember the last time I had held hands with someone. ...

    Oct 5, 2011
  • Archive Re: Two Spirits, One goal[accepting]

    Dmitri: (Thanks, love Arwen's post too. :) Dmitri may be forming a bit of a crush too ;) ) Arwen starts taking me through some streets and down some alleys. ...

    Oct 4, 2011
  • Archive Re: Runaway Elements (full)

    OOC: sorry it's so short, just wanted to try to start this up again.

    Oct 3, 2011
  • Archive Re: Runaway Elements (full)

    Eve: I sat next to Zina and everyone began to give me more details about what I've forgotten. Every once in awhile, I'd think I was going to remember something, ...

    Oct 3, 2011


Why does the Air Force need expensive new bombers? Have the people we've been bombing over the years been complaining?
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