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It wasn't the worst plan in the world, Tesla had to give him that. It definitely needed some more work though. "How many people do you have so far?" she ...

When Tesla woke up, she stretched and headed out. That's when she saw the sign. PUTTING TOGETHER FIGHTING GROUP FIND JOHN MUDD FOR DETAILS. She sighed and headed into the ...

It's not that she didn't think this group the boy was starting was interesting. She just felt like the boy was cornering her, which was something she didn't let anyone ...

After finding nothing interesting in the Visitor's Center, Tesla headed out to explore the rest of the tent, still looking at the camp's defenses. She was too focused on the ...

Sounds like fun. I'm not really sure how to do this though. I'll right any genre but the rating will have to be E.

Tesla was relieved she'd finally made it to Mappe Island. All the people she'd been travelling with had been complaining the entire way and she was tired of listening to ...

I'll work on mine.

Name: Tesla Finley Age: 17 Appearance: Straight dark brown hair falling just above her shoulders, slight frame, dark blue eyes the color of sapphires with spider leg eyelashes. Freckles, slightly ...

I like this poem! My only critic would be that maybe you could put "I" and "Am" on the same line. Other than that, it's perfect! -Tally-wa

Let's go! To lands unknown, To the depths of love, And the crags of hatred, False, and crumbling. Run through the plains of same, Don't lose yourself in the fields ...

"Hey! Wait up!" Eric called, rushing down the halls as he threw his back pack over his shoulder. Ginny glanced over her shoulder and was surprised to see him looking ...

Tgirly: Hi! I like it, it's extremely deep and serious, yet also with a touch of lightness to it. There were grammer and a few spelling errors (when I read ...

I love it. There's a lot of grammatic/spelling errors you could fix, but no flaws within the plot. I love the suspense your creating, hinting in the second chapter about ...

Dmitri: I don't know where I am. I'm lost. I shouldn't have left. I should've waited until we'd gotten back to somewhere safe, or at least until I had some ...

Wow, I really like it. I love the imagery, how you didn't give us too much detail, but we can still see it in our mind's eye so perfectly. My ...