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Name: Emma Age: 17 Appearance: Emma has straight, light brown hair that she keeps in a ponytail. Her eyes are green-gold. She's fare-skinned with a smattering of freckles. She has ...

Save me a spot please; this sounds like fun!

Love the elephant; very original.

He doesn’t know How his eyes make my heart Ache. He doesn’t get That his smile Is like the sun. She’ll never understand How her blush drives me Crazy. She’ll ...

I don’t want your watered-down tears, Your sympathetic stare, Don’t try to make it fair. Skip the clichés, The half-hearted lies, The lengthy lists of whys. I don’t want to ...

Sorry it's so short. Angeline The flames began to die away and the sun began to gain territory in the sky, taking its slow time rising. My ear's been cleaned, ...

You spelled aquaintance wrong, and I'm not completely sure I spelled it right, so you'll have to check that. I like the first part, but I'm not sure you pull ...

Nice poem, good job! You have some nice imagery in it, so good job with that. I don't think the last line is as dramatic as it's intended/could be. But ...

Angeline I was fighting a losing battle: to outrun the fire, to stay conscious, to keep my feet moving; the ony question was which one was going to give out ...

awaken shoud be awakened with a 'd.' Other than that, there weren't any grammatical mistakes and the poem had a nice flow, so good job with that! I'm not sure ...

In the second stanza, I don't think you should end two lines with 'fly,' though I don't know what you could change it to. I like this poem a lot, ...

The categories are kind of confusing, it's fine if you posted it in the wrong category. You, and this poem, definitely have potential. If you could just clean up the ...

You should probably work on your punctuation at the end of the line. Also, the last line of the first stanza was off, it kind of messed up the flow ...

I thought it had a great rythm in the first stanza which you kind of lost in the second two. My favorite part would probably be the first stanza or ...

Pen And paper Completely useless Without each other. Petal And stem One without the other Does not make a flower Sound And ears Not even screaming will do you any ...