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Elsa- "What's not good?" I said, placing my hand on Jayden's shoulder protectively. Adrian shows me the remains of a squooshed spider. My breaths catches in my throat, and I ...

Okay, I fixed that. :) Thanks.

Oh, that makes sense. It does kind of seem like the boy wouldn't want anyone else to see him. I'll change that real quick.

Ivan said you were talking to yourself, and you never argued, so I just assumed the boy was invisible to everyone besides Ice. I can change it if you want.

Blaze- I glance at the teacher, who seems a bit surprised by the question, and bite my lip, trying to gain some composure.

Blaze- "Yeah," I say, looking everywhere but at Adora.

Read the second chapter, really liked it. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Blaze- Six. That's how old my sister, Ember was. She would be seven by now, though. "My brother's nine," I say quietly, staring down at my fists, "his name's Spark."

Blaze- "How old are they?" I ask.

Yeah, it is Snow. I hope so.

the meadow song was a fail. And Haymitch didn't fall off the stage! But other than that, it was pretty acurate to the book, except they could've made it a ...

April Fools!

Oh, oops. I think Drake accidentally killed Jesse. Sorry.

Sweet.

And I reviewed your first chapter, Pixie. Really liked it!