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Beuno! I like your poem. It has a good voice behind the words. Like Audy said. it is walking the line of being superfluous. I think you are very capable ...

This was written in the kitchen. Am i right? I'm right. Right? Before I hit the last line, I was in in the kitchen you sent me to. Then I ...

For you Critiq: Update, I think It reads a lot better. Whats the general consensus of foot notes? Life, Death, and Politics "Did you kill the boy?" a gruff voice ...

Honestly, I started reading this yesterday and was somewhat bored. Maybe it was the intro, or perhaps my lack of sleep. Either way I am sorry for not giving it ...

Wow, I think you have an awesome voice in this piece. This is great. I loved the emotions and the simple setting. I really think this is the best poem ...

"Wise men speak when they have something to say, fools when they have to say something." -Plato I think you should elaborate on this. This is a great topic to ...

Thank you so much for this review! I couldn't agree more on your critiques :) Hi Teo! I think your explanation of scientific terms between the story is distarcting. I ...

Hello, I like the title. I think you should keep writing with this idea! It sounds like Catalina(like the name) is imaginary? I love traveling the world! I have been ...

[Untitled] Experimenting in New York “And frontal nudity, does it bother you?” the young man asked with careful annunciation. “Well not really, I am a twenty four year old college ...

I like this piece. No matter the route we choose to pursue, obstacles will be waiting. How we overcome the trials is the our story, assuming we don't stand still ...

blurp bloop blop . don't stop.dancing. :elephant: I am open to more opinions, good or bad let me hear. I am curious where I could use improvement.

Bravo, Bravo

Hi, I am a little confused by "Dark oblivian stares cruely back at me." and how it relates to winter in this poem. You have some grammatical and spelling errors ...

You make NY look very attractive. I am thinking about moving to Manhattan for culinary school. This only intensifies my desire. I really like the colors and size of #7 ...

I really enjoyed this read! It flowed very well and held my full attention up to the end. I think you have mastered this short. I don't have any criticism ...