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Awesome. I thought this had an excellent flow. Reading it through the eyes of seventh grader is refreshing,delightful,and genuine. Well done, I hope to read more current works of yours ...

Very good, I like this opening and I am impressed with your style. You draw very clear images of a gloomy environment. It could use some revising though, a little ...

Hello Choma, I appreciate your criticism! I added a couple edits, I agree with the excessive 'however' but is more appropriate. I am not going for anything profound, which is ...

ADOPTING DIVERSE SCIENCE FOR CULTURAL DEVELOPMENT mELVIN D. bANGGOLLAY Science is development. It has paved the way for the generation of new concepts, ideas and processes to initiate reform in ...

That Night That night that was filled with pleasure has brought me so much pain. That minute,that moment,that hour of fun has made me feel so much regret. The love ...

Hi there, I am not the best at grammatical nit picks. I am good at voicing my opinion. You give the reader a nice glimpse of imagery with the burial. ...

I think you told the story very well. I like the theme and you ended it perfectly. Good job, keep writing! Ohh and haha! Our state is bigger than "yall's"

hi, i enjoyed reading this. I really like the minimalistic style you chose. I think it all flows very well, well done.

Edit Edit, Criticize criticize , thank you thank you Brush my teeth with Evian after I roll out of bed. Drive to the corner for a soda-pop in my Mercedes ...

I like. Very nice, maybe because i can relate. weell done

The count grew Even as few went away All of us cordially invited I must have surely miscounted each like illimitable strands of hay We quietly wait, the order of ...

Hi Hawkie! I have to say your writing detours me from my own creative writing. Lucky for me and my self confidence I cant help but to write. You should ...

hahah, dually noted. i think it serves better as a second chapter\

You have written an excellent introduction in my book. What books are you reading? I am sure you are reading Dean Koontz or the King, because your intro was bestseller ...

I have to say, Love the title. It is said to not judge a book by its covers, but how else to do we choose what to read here. The ...