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Re: and i am lonely now.
Bonjour, Telle! I think the concept idea behind this is cool, but I don't like the photograph much. Your hair's a bit too much in your face, and while I ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: cute little boys
Hello Telle! I think these photos are taken at just the right angles to make the most out of their cuteness, so brilliantly well dones. The personal nit-pick I have ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: cute little boys
Hi Telle! How cuuuute! I like the first photo, but I think the blur is more or less overdone and I would tone it down a little, to keep some ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: cute little boys
They are defiantly adorable, I will tell you that! The only thing I don't like is something in the first picture. The little boys face is too white. His eyes ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: and i am lonely now.
ok this is good. it is a bit bright colored for the tone you are putting on it. The picture and story don't match but they are both very nice. ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: cute little boys
these are pics of my nephews. i added effects while passing away the time, and i hope you'll like them. the older one is named Ian Shen and his younger ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: and i am lonely now.
hello, ben. thanks for the comment. i'm glad you've liked this one..i just experimented on it and i didn't really expected this result. hey..i'm this girl, and i'm also glad ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: and i am lonely now.
hello, lava. actually, i'm also having troubles on how to edit this so that it'll look lonely and dull, but then i just adjusted the saturation and brightness, and i ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: and i am lonely now.
i was once a sweet-natured girl, whose curious mind wanted to know what it is that people called LOVE.. and then one thing led to another, and the sweet girl ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: a poem..or a story?
you should probably make it a free verse epic poem. either that or blank verse. i think that'd add an interesting twist to it. but i don't think it should ...
May 5, 2009 -
Re: a poem..or a story?
some time ago, my classmate, martin, wanted me to make him a long narrative poetry which i understand to be an epic. he wants it to be in rhythm, four ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: a poem..or a story?
some time ago, my classmate, martin, wanted me to make him a long narrative poetry which i understand to be an epic. he wants it to be in rhythm, four ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Gone, but not Forgotten
~~~~~ another murder-mystery! "one by one, the women disappeared. the only clues left were a black rose and a single note, written 'Gone, but not Forgotten' .. the signature of ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Sleeping Beauty
~~~~~ i really love reading murder-mystery novels, and when my classmate recommended it for me to read, i immediately loved it from the first chapter. the characters felt so real, ...
Jan 7, 2009
