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*because i really miss him..and i'm playing with rhyme.* I. You hummed out a sweet, sad note Then took out a pen and wrote and old familiar quote There was ...

I had to take my guitar and sing it :O i great melody. Do you sing your self? i think the ending goodbye was kinda pointless. over all the thing ...

hello ross. okay. this is a nice song: you've got the emotions poured out, you've spoken with force, with conviction. when i read it, i thought it would be something ...

*because his absence inspired me..* I. I leave the door open, hoping you'll come home again Your favorite flower sits in a vase on my drawer The petals fall to ...

Don't worry about the rest, it will take care of itself the best all you have to do is take flight. Simply beautiful. :)

personally i don't quite get the sense in your poem. well, maybe you intended to confuse, but really.. this piece is quite confusing. i understand it a little. i'm quite ...

wow, guys. thanks so much for the feedbacks. i greatly appreciated them. :)

We have been rendered senseless hey, ross. i love paramore too, and i love the lyrics you wrote here. wish there could be a way to hear it. :)

We used to live inside a fairy tale-- With colors, music, life and love. It was, so far, the perfect world, And we were, so far, the perfect pair. We ...

hey there! i love your poem. actually, there are some lines that confused me, and some lines that are out of rhythm (but i think you have good parallelism) but ...

hey guys. thanks so much for the help! actually, this is just a draft, but i posted it here so i can earn comments and hopefully edit it. i appreciated ...

I sit by my bedroom window. The sky was dark, bringing the promise of rain. On the sidewalk, someone stood. I squinted my eyes to look closely. He smiled and ...

*one of the songs i made for my story, Four Little Words. It was the loveliest afternoon, I held your hand and looked in your eyes I promised you we'll ...

hello jake. i don't have that talent for suggesting titles though, but i love this piece. you have a band or something? that would be good then. i can see ...

The sound of laughter filled the air as a girl and a boy ran across the park, the grass muffling the sounds made by their little feet, their shouts of ...