telle_04

hey, otherone! i love your sketches. :D especially the second one. i'm not really an expert when it comes to sketches, but i think they're wonderful. keep them up. :)

wow, they're adorably cute. however, i'd suggest that the third and fourth pictures be left just the way they are? i mean, in full color. it's dull to see only ...

*i can't believe how he unknowingly inspires me. I. I see you there, I lose all my control So unaware, but you're so beautiful The way you talk, you do ...

thanks for appreciating it. :) it made my day.

quickreply: hey, silent. this poem makes me feel so nostalgic. nice imagery, and nice play of words. i can't say anything else, because everyone here took the chance. keep writing. ...

*i'll appreciate the reviews. :) I. Dear diary, I saw him today He had this smile when he walked my way His eyes rested on me for a while But ...

hey, shaken. nice words. maybe you'd want to make a song out of it? just thinking. :D keep writing and stay motivated. -telle.

hey dark. i won't focus on the grammar and capitalization and punctuation and other errors, because the other reviewers have pointed them out. still, i encourage you to keep writing ...

hi butterfinger. i like it. i love the strong emotions. punctuation and grammar can be easily edited, so no need to focus on that. nice words. keep writing. `telle. :)

hey, rain. :) just a quick reply: maybe you can improve on punctuation and capitalization, but i think the poem was cute just the way it is. and um..i didn't ...

Short. Simple. Lovely. Keep writing. :D

I liked the imagery in these lyrics a lot. It gives the audience something to think about instead of just complaining about your heartbreak. I appreciate the poetry of this ...

You have a very beautiful way of writing. I like it alot. Your lyrics almost tell a story and it could be such a beautiful song with the right music. ...

Hey, The Lyrics sounds like they should be sung by someone like Taylor Swift. They are quite good love-ish lyrics. No critisms for them, but at the same time, they ...

hey undeadbunnie. mind if i sneak around? :) first stanza is good, except for this one: It's the empty feeling inside It's the things I don't confide In you when ...