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~~~~~ i really love reading murder-mystery novels, and when my classmate recommended it for me to read, i immediately loved it from the first chapter. the characters felt so real, ...

your story seems interesting enough for me to want to read more. Some of your grammar can be fixed when you re-read your way though it. And some of your ...

thanks for the suggestions. i know the first chapter isn't that good, because i just wrote it on a piece of paper yesterday morning, and i didnt have much time ...

it really needs improvement, and you can do a lot. Chapter One "Definitely yes." It was Denisse's strong and firm voice that echoed in the large Hall of the Palace. ...

it really needs editions, and i'm open for suggestions.. Chapter Two “They will never know” When the first faint hue of sunlight crept inside their room, Katie was already up. ...

hello, archer123.. Glass eyes and Ghosts..nice title.where'd you get it? actually, it was nice..building up suspense and mystery.though there are some errors, a few corrections and it will be fine. ...

**reviews will be appreciated** as i watched the stars glisten in the sky i wished there would be someone who will get them and lay them before my feet... until ...

**another poem for my best friend** **reviews will be appreciated** tearful eyes stare at me, loud accusing voices fill the room; angry words are thrown everywhere, like spears from an ...

**a poem that formed itself in my mind..dedicated to my best friend..** **reviews will be appreciated..** ~ your smile greets me warmly revealing happiness when you see me your laughter ...

hello bleeding rose.. i'm just checking things out.. may i ask why this was your chosen title?..i was just curious.. anyway it was nice, well-written..i love how you describe the ...

He sat at the opposite end of the couch, inhaling on his cigarette and playing with my cell phone. I watched him coyly, silently, nearly predatorily. For the last three ...

:) :) :) haha..angel very funny. mr. Gardner reminds me of our Social Studies teacher, the very handsome but married Mr. Reyes. Nice description for a teacher, though. **i just ...

hello lucyy.. i'm still new here at yws, and i was just checking things out.. may i ask: is "A Titleless Story" really your chosen title..?perhaps you still want to ...

hello clup91.. i'm still new here in yws, and i was just checking things out.. nice introduction, if it was one.. only that the character's emotion made me sad. When ...

hello carelessaussie13.. i'm still new here in yws..and i was just checking things out.. what really caught my attention was the "gods and goddesses" thing..though i'm not that interested in ...