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you should probably make it a free verse epic poem. either that or blank verse. i think that'd add an interesting twist to it. but i don't think it should ...

some time ago, my classmate, martin, wanted me to make him a long narrative poetry which i understand to be an epic. he wants it to be in rhythm, four ...

some time ago, my classmate, martin, wanted me to make him a long narrative poetry which i understand to be an epic. he wants it to be in rhythm, four ...

hi, selene.. the first paragraph, for me, reads well, but i think there are some sentences that got me off the hook. nevertheless, i think it's a good beginning. Forests ...

hi.. is it okay if i quote some things? The loss of what could have been i really don't understand what kind of loss it is.. Like northen lights no ...

hey, winter.. this is your first poem? that's nice then. but i think it will be okay for you if i cite some things, right?.okay here goes: first, i really ...

hi stardust.. i'm gonna tell you this: i really don't love twilight (okay, i like it, but i'm not an avid fan), but i love the way people make stories ...

please bear with grammar..and i'm open for critics..** What I've become.. my life started as being a sweet-natured girl, whose curious mind wanted to know what is it that people ...

please bear with grammar..and i'm open for critics..** Melody's Bedroom Light starts to hide, Replaced by darkness. The sun waves good-bye, The moon takes its place. The stirring noise-- Of ...

hi hannah.. i really like it.. i mean, i love poetry with a lot of descriptions. okay, here i go **clicks** there! a gold star.. (you're welcome) :D :D :D ...

oh, idiotic boyfriend..are you pertaining to yourself? :lol: for me, it was fine.. and you used a-b-b-a kind of pattern, right, which i find quite hard. very well, i know ...

hello, vuzfek.. hhmm.. Spring Magic.. nice title you got there. okay, inspite some redondency, and some flosses, it was fine. i really like ton give you a gold star. i ...

hello alexbc101.. i have to agree with the other comments:it was absolutely nice, especially for a beginner. well, it's really hard to reminisce, especially if you've had lots of sad ...

hello threm. hhm.. except for some grammar flosses, this poem was really nice for me, like you've written it just the way how you exactly felt it. i think it's ...

~~~~~ another murder-mystery! "one by one, the women disappeared. the only clues left were a black rose and a single note, written 'Gone, but not Forgotten' .. the signature of ...