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I really liked this piece. Hopefully you'll post the rest soon=]. I think every one else got all the mistakes. Well, Keep writing --Jess. thanks, jess. i'm glad you appreciated ...

Capital letters, yes. Watch that. Now, this was telly, but that was its charm. I liked the plot line a lot. The boy's character confused me a bit - why ...

It was good and I liked it. You were jumping between tenses often, though, please fix it. Well written, but REMEMBER YOUR CAPITALS!!!!!!! What was happening? Are you against capitals? ...

*this is an edited version. thanks for the reminder, Lava. :) Prologue: The sound of laughter filled the air as a girl and a boy ran across the park, the ...

hello. i really loved this. i remembered our lesson in english last month..about a sick rose because of an invisible worm who slowly killed her, and the last rose of ...

hello. i love this simple but sweet poem. though, of course it 's unnecessary to write all the words beginning with capital letters. no further ado. keep it up. i ...

hello. i think this is pretty cool. i love the title, and i love the post because it is far from what the title is all about. i expected something ...

hi bowlove.. "what do i?" well, i think it's nice. just watch out for grammar and spelling. i think you should maintain the a-b-a-b type, or pattern. like this: What ...

midnight bliss! hi, i'm just curious why you named this Love's Devil Moon. it's a nice title, yes. :lol: i don't understand much about this part. Is her name Aisha? ...

hello, liadonwriter92.. 1940's is an age of wars, right? i think you had your story fine; the historical aspect, the characters.. but i have a few things to clarify. i ...

hi, jules... okay, about this one: i think, i'm a little confused with this kind of approach. you know, how quickly the story shifts, and then it was four years ...

The young boy was shown into the Great Hall. Dressed in little more than rags, he stared about himself in wonder, craning his neck to gaze up at the soaring ...

hi.. would you mind if i arrange this? I want to die, I want to cry, to be closer to you. Every inch of my body is held down in ...

I wish everything would simply be a dream. And then i could always be with you. but then, Not all wishes do come true. I've promised myself that I'd grow ...

I'm gonna smile. I'm gonna laugh. I'm gonna be happy. I'm gonna move on... like everything's okay. I'll smile cause it'll all be over. I'll laugh cause everything will be ...