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Re: cute little boys
They are defiantly adorable, I will tell you that! The only thing I don't like is something in the first picture. The little boys face is too white. His eyes ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: haiku
hey, you're being active now. keep it up. `telle.
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: and i am lonely now.
ok this is good. it is a bit bright colored for the tone you are putting on it. The picture and story don't match but they are both very nice. ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: cute little boys
these are pics of my nephews. i added effects while passing away the time, and i hope you'll like them. the older one is named Ian Shen and his younger ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: inside your heart.
hello, firearris. i appreciated this. thanks for pointing this out, well..i'm not really done with editing, so mind my capitalization and punctuation. thanks again. `telle
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: inside your heart.
this used to be a poem, but i arranged it and added some chords, and now i'm playing it on my guitar. hope you'll like it, and sorry if it's ...
Jan 15, 2010 -
Re: and i am lonely now.
hello, ben. thanks for the comment. i'm glad you've liked this one..i just experimented on it and i didn't really expected this result. hey..i'm this girl, and i'm also glad ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: and i am lonely now.
hello, lava. actually, i'm also having troubles on how to edit this so that it'll look lonely and dull, but then i just adjusted the saturation and brightness, and i ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: and i am lonely now.
i was once a sweet-natured girl, whose curious mind wanted to know what it is that people called LOVE.. and then one thing led to another, and the sweet girl ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Silence: Chapter One
wow.(takes a breath) this is COOL. as in cool, like, i haven't thought of putting things like homosexuality and deafness and high school life together. this is really AMAZING. i ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: S.E.R.E.N.A
S ass, and class with all that jazz, E veryday I’ll smile and wave R un and skip around with friends E njoying the fun that never ends N o ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Your Smile
hello, serena. okay, so this it's nice but there are some things that bothered me. the previous comments mentioned capitalization already, so i won't talk about it anymore. To see ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Four Little Words: Prologue
hahaha.. i'm telle_04's brother. i'm a real SPOILER, and i will babble all what will happen in the story. just joking. i've read this since chapter 13 (the ORIGINAL manuscript). ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Four Little Words: Prologue
Hey telle! what's up? So the story was really cute and charming. I liked the characters,how you states them. I really like how you began the story and your style ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Four Little Words: Prologue
I thought this was very charming, mistakes aside. I think Durriedog got most of the mistakes, so I'll work on flow and such. Firstly, I agree that you need to ...
Jan 11, 2010
