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I liked the story, but you did stray off the subject a couple of times. But, the outline and subject was very good. i thought the albino vampire thing was ...

I thought it was great. it was easy to read and understand. The opening was very intriguing to me, but it really gets the reader interested, and makes it to ...

You wake up and get dressed as usual. Put on some mascara, eyeliner, and even dab on a little blush. It's a work day, so you get in your car ...