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Re: Love Is
Your poem is beautiful! The butterflies, they slowly crawl On their quest To find the heart beating Within my chest. Not all make it - Some will fly. Even love ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Morning Glory
Fand and Desire said it all. I still think you work is beautiful. Dont get down and keep writing! Everyone needs improvments! letting their last I love you's be whispered ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Its a good piece. Over all its powerful and to the point. Your heart may be pure stone But I am made of flesh and bone And you may feel ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Alone.
Wonerful! Yanking it out, Cuts were made throughout, The floor turned red, And the eyes closed. Leaving behind nothing , But blood. A soft smile on the lips, And 'sorry' ...
Aug 10, 2011