taylormcmullen92

You gave me closure Now I know it’s over I thought I’d be more upset But I’m just in a ret Yeah I’m pissed I’m so glad I didn’t get ...

Your poem is beautiful! The butterflies, they slowly crawl On their quest To find the heart beating Within my chest. Not all make it - Some will fly. Even love ...

Amazing! Beautiful work! will her ever come? Its a typo but no big deal. He not her. I love it! Keep writing! --Taylor

It’s not fair that you told me all of these things and then ripped them from my fingertips like they meant nothing. You told me you loved me and I ...

Fand and Desire said it all. I still think you work is beautiful. Dont get down and keep writing! Everyone needs improvments! letting their last I love you's be whispered ...

Its a good piece. Over all its powerful and to the point. Your heart may be pure stone But I am made of flesh and bone And you may feel ...

I always find myself sitting somewhere in a public place just think about life and then an crazy idea for writing will come to me. When I first started to ...

Hi Everyone! Im Taylor and Im new to YWS!! Im very excited to get started and meet new young writers! See around!

Your peom is beautiful. Now I just hope that it’s not too late For me to go up to you and say That I still love the way You say ...

not yet I think and the clouds cover the sun not yet and I stand taking the grass in my hand with me Those last lines are so powerful and ...

Wonerful! Yanking it out, Cuts were made throughout, The floor turned red, And the eyes closed. Leaving behind nothing , But blood. A soft smile on the lips, And 'sorry' ...

Wow. This poem is so sad, but very good. I felt every word as if I was you. Very good all around. Keep it up!

I love it. You draw everyone into it in the begining. I think everyone feels that way when they've been dissapointed by the ones they love. Keep it up, your ...

All I can say is AMAZAZING!! I know everyone else has written a lot more but I'm out of words... I love your work! Keep it up! You've inspired me.

Some walks you have to take alone, to feel the pain that no one else understands, to be cut off from the world and lost in your own agonizing thoughts. ...